Sigh. I'm clearly outnumbered here. I can't speak for the writer of that article but I am huge Sci Fi, especially military Sci Fi, fan. I've read so many books and seen so many movies that I understand everything can't be scrutinized or to just relax and enjoy the story. He had forty points. Cherry picking his weakest ones but ignoring some others that may raise even the biggest homer's eyebrow is asinine.
But
If you don't think it's annoyingly convenient that General Han Solo has his ship stolen, somehow, and then wandering the galaxy just happens to come across it as our heroes expertly out maneuvered several tie fighters in a ship described as unable to even fly then fine.
This makes the THIRD huge bad guy installation to be destroyed since episode four. Three out of four movies had this as the climax. Ok fine.
Kylo, though injured by Chewbacca crossbow bolt that I guess he didn't sense but easily stopped Poe's early in the film, got his ass kicked by a baby in the force and a trash man storm trooper and then the earth split them apart to allow his escape. How convenient. Oh and why the hell is Han constantly amazed at Chewie's weapon?!? He's seen it fire during countless adventures hasn't he? Oh sorry, this is some modified weapon we weren't told about but must infer that is a new thing.
So there's a Republic and a Rebellion? A Rebellion from the Republic? Don't know, guess we'll hope almost two years from now it's explained
I feel like I'm repeating myself. Going round and round with other movie goings who don't have the answers either is pointless. I liked the film but felt it jumped too far ahead, that it's pacing was way off, and had several areas where writers said, F logic, it's Star Wars. I don't like a ton of holes in my movies. One of the things I really liked about episodes 1-3 is it filled in a lot of the references made in the originals. Not perfect at all and neither is episode 7 and I'm guilty of having way too high of expectations.