Huge fan of Pinball Magazine. I have every one, and have ordered books, etc. as well.
I intend this as constructive criticism, nothing negative. I'm so glad you're making this magazine. I would suggest that you do more editing, in general. This story, while interesting, should easily be able to be cut down to one magazine (!) I think the magazine would be better if it had more broad coverage of the pinball world, rather than getting SOOOO deep on every topic. My 2 cents, with respect.