This thread is nuts.. Seems like both sides are a little at fault, maybe more so nifty.. I don't really know anymore. All I do know is that playfield touchup is bad.
From my experience, and following Clay's blog I know you CANNOT simply touchup small lettering by hand, you have to either create a mask or use waterslide decals and then clear over that. The swirls should have been able to come out better than that using the right tools.. Hell, lightly sand with 1200 grit sandpaper and clear it if you have to.
I have a good feeling that even after the OP pays, he's not going to be happy with the way this turned out. Can't speak for Nifty's other restores, but this one only looks good on the outside.