Thanks for making this PF for us.
I only looked at your pics for 5 seconds -- I haven't given them a complete QC review -- since I'm not on the payroll.
"shoot again" is using mis-matched fonts -- this stood out right away as a glaring mistake.
As you know, this area of the playfield is by far, the most critical area that must look good, since of course that's where the player's focus is the most)
I mean these are things "anyone" with artistic talent, can see in seconds. It's a "feel" thing. I didn't need to see the original to know this was quite wrong.