Quoted from flashinstinct:I applaud their effort. However if you want to get $100K from people, don't spend 5 minutes staring beside the camera at the huge text board. Learn your scripts, make cuts in between and show where you are now. Put some spike into it. I had a hard time watching both of these guys talking because it didn't feel authentic nor was it motivational.
Agreed, this is how you do a kick-start;