Looks pretty good, although- and maybe this is just me since I'm used to Stargate (Which is chalk full of cool toys and figures)- it looks a little empty to me. The shot layout looks great, it just kind of looks like there's empty space that could be filled with some nice figures or something, especially in the back. The Noid on the pizza also looks a little lonely to me...
The rest looks and sounds nice though! This is making me kind of jealous of my cousin who works for Domino's! Definitely one of the coolest companies in the food industry. (There's this, and their donations program to their employees. They helped my cousin with some of the expenses when his dad passed away.)