I saw this back at the UKPP but it's good to have a closer view.
I generally like it, but there is a lot going on... I would say:
- giant egg vs. small eggs. I would either have one or the other, both doesn't look good due to scaling. If the eggs were behind the big egg then ok, but to have the little egg in front of the big egg makes it look like a mega sized egg
- stars/planets?/starburst stars are over done, less is definitety more. In both movies they make space feel big and empty not cluttered
- skull gate... I also don't get this, I saw them and thought of Terminator (human skulls getting crushed) not Alien. One impregnated human face really well hidden would have been cool
- why is it all so symmetrical? needs more randomness to that edging
I'm in for an LE so looking forward to seeing that.